All Comments on 'The power of Authority: Mother'

Nice job. This could be made into a very nice series. Keep up great work!

[mac] That was a fun one. So far you had a nice ratio of kinky teasing descriptions to storyline progress. I love the mind control / incest fantasy and to see it fulfilled by the means of authority commands is something I haven't read so far. I'd also look forward to a series!

I would love more.

Decent concept you should write more of his Adventures. He can hook up with a rich widow and her Daughter or a Divorce and her daughter, just saying great story arch.

Please write more on this story..

Pity you can't write. I should have realized when I saw the description.

"Jason and his mother is about to get an......"

Should be "are about" as there are two people in the description.

Please stop.