All Comments on 'The Power of Control'

You lost me at wolf. Not my bag, but keep writing. Like everything else in life, the more you do it the better you will get. Congrats on your 1st story.

I need to take a few read to understand wtf with the wolf thing and realize it is anthropomorphic thing. I like the story but the anthropomorphic thing kinda turn me off. hope you keep writing and bring stuff like this and leaving the anthropomorphic thing behind.

A 12" long 4" wide cock? Why don't you just have him fuck them with a baseball bat? One star.

Good story but lose the "wolf" theme. It has no relevance and was never brought up again after the sixth paragraph.

Stopped reading at the third paragraph.

I like your animal fantasy story which is excellent. I hope you continue the SAGA......

Okay, like others it wasn't my cup of tea with the whole animal thing. For a first effort however, it wasn't too bad. Keep on trying and take advice from others. The sentences were at least a decent length and made sense mostly. I've seen stories from more accomplished writers where the sentences read like a police report and the spelling was atrocious.

Don't get discouraged.

One star?

Would even bother with this crap. Got 1/2 way through and read enough

Honestly, I'm not a furry personally, but this story is greatly written.

Hope to see this turn into a sequel soon!