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Prfsrabout 2 years agoGreat story, a few writing errors. The constant switching between present tense and past tense was distracting.
32aaabout 2 years agoLovely story of two long lost lovers. Finding each other. Reflecting on 'what might... could have been'... if only. thoughts that many of us make as our life goes on.
Yes. He cheated on his wife. It sounded like she didn't know what she had.
Charlotte making it easy for John by erasing all contact information.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoGreat first story. Present tense is much harder than past tense. Have you thought about using an editor to help?
katibover 1 year agoGood basic story, but unless one is seeking to read descriptions of sexual contacts, pretty bland and almost boring. Story has enough description and non-essential detail to resemble a Victorian novel.
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lawnut@lawnutUpdate November 22nd... I'm not dead, yet. Took a bit of time off, returning to writing I'm September for part 3 of John Prescots story. Was putting finishing touches on it today.... file got corrupted. Lost all 19 pages... FML Thank you so much for the warm responses. All o...
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