All Comments on 'The Present'

by BenLong

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Gary13Gary13almost 10 years ago
Nice fantasy.

Many errors, but a good story.

tazz317tazz317almost 10 years ago
IS THIS A GIFT OR A TENSE

and how will the payback work, over indulgence is too hard to pay back. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Started writing as submissions on the old Voyeurweb.com bulletin boards. Found I had a bit of a knack for stories that people like, and just continued. I love to hear back from readers when they like a story, or with story ideas, suggestions, or just discussions on anything.