All Comments on 'The Pretender'

An editor would be a start, but the author could benefit from a year or two of remedial English. The apparent indifference to grammar, syntax, and sentence structure all get in the way of the story.

No idea what this Annonymous user is saying. I understand the story. Of course I do it's my story but even if it wasn't I still would understand it. I edited a lot of this story so it can be published. The finished result is what it is. The lone sentence near the buttom wasn't planned that way. Might have been a mistake I overlooked. It ain't easy writting or editing work on this site do to a small box to type in. Saying mean things about someones education or lack of intelligence is totally uncalled for. Maybe that's why this Annonymous user is Anonnymous. He or she don't have the guts to show their actual name and allow access to their channel and be criticized in return.

***Thanks for the read.