All Comments on 'The Price'

I deeply enjoyed that story. It had the perfect mix of action being both fighting and fucking as well as a few interesting kinks which were very hot. The emotional part in the last part when the death was explained managed to leave me in tears as it hit home somewhat. You obviously put much thought into this as the interesting twists clearly prove and it is appreciated. It is such a well crafted all encompassing tale. I must check out all your other works both past and future. Thank you for your time, effort, and skill in creating this piece.

Be well and stay safe.

J.D.

This is well structured and flows great but I cannot give this anymore than a three stars because of the character whiplash that is Reina, she loves the twins mother so much and seems to care about her daughters enough to get and memorize all the gifts she has gotten them but, if not for a random whore she would have killed them seemingly without hesitation? And now that she has been totally changed by a few days of sex with said whore she is fine with letting them live and stay with her but only if they are "useful". Maybe I'm missing something but Reina just bothers me to much from the reading to really like this story