All Comments on 'The Price for Saying No'

That was HOT! I would love to see another chapter. Surely he's not done yet!

I'm dripping wet after reading that

I gave this story a lower rating mostly because you didn't take advantage of the opportunity to twist the ending. It really reminded me of the story of Brer Fox and Brer Rabbit ("No,no, Brer Fox! Please don't throw me into that briar patch!"). It would have made your female figure more like a real person. As it stands, you've barely described her (although you were quick to tell us her bra size). Perhaps a second chapter might redeem your protagonist. Don't quit yet.

Great story! Would love more!

It was hot but really short. You need to make it longer or write another chapter. And soon. Coz i know that im dying to find out what happens next.

If you need any ideas you could always contact me ;-) hehe.

My.email is steph.sem.1992@live.com if u are stuck.or want me to proof read for you :-)

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