All Comments on 'The Price of Admission'

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archermaryarchermaryalmost 11 years ago

I am a Star Trek fan of many, many years. I loved this story and thought it was well written and in its own way, true to Trek. Did not think these two worlds would ever come together but they have. Well done!

mapili50mapili50almost 11 years ago
Fantastic!

I'm a scifi maniac and loved going to a StarTrek convention. I agree with the previous poster, the dialogue is excellent and really seemed true to Gene Roddenberry's characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The beating was way too extreme for my taste. If you wanted to explore an extreme side, I would have explored some of her more depraved fantasies. Being beaten black and blue with her breast skin breaking did nothing for me.

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