The Price of Temptation

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Beryl shook her head. Her eyes were flicking all over the place, but avoiding Ursula's gaze at all costs. Ursula leaned forward, looking at the older woman.

'Beryl, look at me,' she said. 'Do you think I so much as kissed this man? A client's husband?'

Beryl looked at Ursula. Ursula looked back, unblinking, her gaze steady. After a moment, Beryl's shoulders sagged in relief.

'No, of course not,' she said. 'I'm sorry, Ursula. But this woman ... she was so angry.'

'Yes, I know.'

Ursula frowned, as though coming to a momentous decision. Then, she lowered her voice as she spoke.

'Beryl, listen,' she said. 'Because of client confidentiality, I can't say too much. But I can tell you this: I met with Sally yesterday. And her husband.'

Beryl's mouth yawned open.

Ursula said: 'This is strictly between you and me?'

'Of course,' said Beryl.

'All right...'

The two women leaned over the counter, like conspirators.

'I don't know if you remember Sally's husband?' began Ursula.

'The hunk of prime beef who was here last week?' said Beryl. 'Of course I remember him! The yoga girls are still talking about him!'

'Well, he called me after that session. Twice. The first time, to thank me; the second time, to tell me he wanted to sleep with me.'

Beryl just stared. Ursula pressed on.

'Anyway, I told him no, several times, but he was persistent. He wouldn't take no for an answer. Finally, he sent me a text message with a date, a time and a hotel room number.'

'What a nerve!' burst out Beryl. 'That's unbelievable! What did you do?'

'I showed up at the hotel,' said Ursula. 'But I also made sure his wife knew about it.'

Beryl's eyes were popping out of her head. Ursula waited while she processed the information. One of the other female life coaches came in through the main door, wishing them a good morning. Ursula and Beryl said good morning back, then turned away to make it clear they were in the middle of something. The woman took the hint and disappeared into a back room. Beryl turned to Ursula.

'So, what happened?' she said.

'Well, as you can imagine, there were some fireworks,' said Ursula. 'The husband was pretty calm, but his wife was bouncing off the walls.'

'It's probably not the first time for him,' said Beryl with disgust. 'But what did you do?'

'I did what I could,' said Ursula. 'I told this man to his face that he was a manipulative bastard, and I told his wife that his behaviour was a toxic presence in her life. And then I left. I mean, what more could I do?'

Beryl leaned back, shaking her head in amazement. Then she stopped and looked at Ursula, as though struck by an understanding.

'And, of course, the wife is angry at you,' said Beryl. 'Not the philandering husband, but the "other woman". Why is that always the way?'

'Well, I read some material on the subject,' said Ursula. 'And I think what it boils down to is this: If you base your life on an illusion, you don't want that illusion taken away. That's why people find the truth so hard to accept, even when it's staring them in the face.'

Beryl nodded as she pondered this. Then she gave Ursula a sideways look.

'Mind you,' said Beryl, 'that man was quite a dish. Didn't the thought cross your mind?'

'Well, of course!' said Ursula. 'I mean, being a feminist doesn't mean I don't have needs and desires. But here's the thing about good-looking men, Beryl: They have a kind of power over women which most men don't have. And you know what they say about power corrupting?'

Again, Beryl nodded as she digested this. Ursula smiled. People were now coming into the wellness centre, so Ursula wished Beryl a good morning and made her way up the staircase. She entered her favourite consulting room, hung her coat on the old-fashioned hat-stand and glanced at the clock. She still had time for her morning meditation before her first client arrived.

Today was going to be a good day.


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A_BierceA_Biercealmost 2 years ago

An often-mentioned dilemma involves holding two opposed thoughts in your mind at the same time. This brilliant story not only alludes to it, but also causes it. First rate, mate.

bobareenobobareenoalmost 2 years ago

That was an interesting story. 5 stars. The Clio was over emphasized, however.

gatorhermitgatorhermitabout 2 years ago
Had to read this one twice

First, it fits LW as Sally turned out to be a loving wife. Second, the point of the story is unusually subtle for LW. Once you get it, the sarcasm is overpowering. Third, nice pun in the story title.

PS surprised she drove a Clio instead of the dreaded Prius!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

No matter what

Hopefully latrine boy stays where he belongs.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 2 years ago

NVDiceGuy take your balls out of your wife's purse. If being a SIMP/Beta is all you are live with that reality but don't try and put down the BTB crowd because you can't keep the bull's out of your home.

3 stars

Frank66Frank66over 2 years ago

My first thought- too clever by half, then I realized that none of what happened in the hotel room, words or actions, fit Ursula's little story to Beryl about making sure the wife knew what was going on. No, she lied, thus forfeiting her stance as a strong and independently minded feminist. She got 'played', which I don't think was the author's intention at all. Nonetheless.......

onlythelonelyloveonlythelonelyloveover 2 years ago

This was a good story that didn’t score well, but not for the reason offered by Anon: “ Why do you think your story is garnering so few comments and such a low score? Those who deny it can't understand it, and those who get it can't accept it. You struck the Leftists right in their souls, and they can't forgive you for piercing a part of humanity they deny exists.” It might be that the reason the story is not rating well is that some or perhaps even many folks feel that it is not finished. On one level, I recognize that “this is life.” On the other hand we read big fat paperbacks because we want alternatives to “the way things are…” Perhaps this is a dry run for the new story you have started about “marriage equality” so I will be interested to see if it also involves a therapist!

It might shock some to consider the possibility that human desire can muck with long held beliefs. Folks with racist beliefs fall in love with people with the “wrong” skin colour. Who would think it possible? Rightists fall for leftists. Randian acolytes enjoy shared intimacy with comrades communists. Viva the difference!

So, back to the story. It is not finished. There is no way that MR. Price is going to be happy with this outcome on any number of levels. An easily manipulated wife? And for what purpose? So he can cut off his nose to spite his own face? OK, even if you buy that premise which needs some justification by the way, the masterful way he set things up appears to work against the story set up. His wife is on him about housework and he can’t do better than have her go to therapy to deal with the situation? It is the UNEXPLAINED incongruity of it that is a turn-off, at least for me. Perhaps the new story will do a better job. The Yonder World had a triangle, so perhaps the new story will as well…

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyalmost 3 years ago

Really well done but probably fires synapses the BTB crowd isn’t used to.

ErotFanErotFanover 3 years ago
So Ursula was right

Jeff Price _was_ a manipulative bastard and his behavior is a toxic presence in Sally's life. I imagine what set him off was the "joke" Ursula made about taking his wife's name. He was very perceptive and clever; but then manipulative personalities are.

Freddie has a penchant for tension filled dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
No matter what

the piece of shit Trump is now in the latrine of the history and it is good so!

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