by Christine_Wheelwright
Love the structure. The brevity of each chapter makes it difficult to rate per chapter but as a whole I’d give it a 5
Thankyou for your kind comment. The later chapters become longer as Tak is removed from the Temple and his adventures begin in earnest. Literotica is releasing the chapters one per day, so it will take many weeks for the full story to emerge. But, as I imagine Priestess Ashala might say, 'Patience is a fine quality in a boy'.