by RDBernards
Good beginning shows much promise for developing plots along several lines.
Please keep writing.
MLJ
Thank you very much MLJ.
Your encouragement means a lot to me :)
I also have to give credit Kenji Sato. He is a great editor who has helped me learn how to write better.
Well done. 5-stars. Great creation of mood and pace. Worth continuing for more episodes.
A royal fuck story that is nicely done. The plot is simple with no possible conflict. Miss Wickham hast the mammaries to be a long-term wet nurse, but women have to be pregnant to produce milk, an error of fact we will ignore. The sucking and fucking is in keeping with the genre. Keep it short and simple is a dictum that this story follows well