All Comments on 'The Prince of Pleasure'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

There aren't enough hot 40k stories in the world. Thanks for writing this one :)

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumover 1 year ago

I usually can read most stories good or bad. However in your story it’s nothing but confusing. You starting the middle of a battle with no reason why the fighting is going on. I could only read about 2/3 of first page and gave up. Maybe you explain the circumstances on battle but it should be near the beginning to help reader.

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