by SirNarrator
There aren't enough hot 40k stories in the world. Thanks for writing this one :)
I usually can read most stories good or bad. However in your story it’s nothing but confusing. You starting the middle of a battle with no reason why the fighting is going on. I could only read about 2/3 of first page and gave up. Maybe you explain the circumstances on battle but it should be near the beginning to help reader.