All Comments on 'The Prince's Potion Ch. 01'

He has claimed his Queen. Now he must claim both sisters to insure breeding heirs into the kingdom. More please! 5☆

I don't comment too often but this story definately rates one. I hope you continue to write. You have great promise.

Awesome story line that holds promise for more carnal family adventure in the future...

Nice first story. Keep going! And since you put so much emphasis on the queen's enormous tits, I hope we actually get to read about some tit fucking.

Really good story. Game of Thrones vibes for sure. The only critique is the whole potion thing. If doesn't climax he dies, yikes. Maybe faze that out of story line as the story continues. Just make it a beautiful ancient times incest story, that would be hotter. Just an opinion. But you are a great writer.

Loved this story but you need to continue and see if there is more incest and maybe mother and sister become pregnant 5 stars

Absolute banger

Hopefully he impregnates them all!

Very nice story waiting on more gave it a 5

Really fun, well-written story!

Holy shit Batman on a stick! This was such a great smutty story I absolutely LOVED it.

Queen is so hot!!! Built like a Goddess and was able to save her son! I'm so glad the princess despite all her efforts had to yield to a superior woman. Yeah, May has the brain, the arcane knowledge and was well versed in the art of sex thanks to the old Wizard. Still May's heart was in the right place and she was willing to do all in her power to save the kid. Good sister, I was afraid she might've been poisoning him.

Ancient times, magic, court intrigues, hot mother... dare I say this story has it all for hardcore m/s fanatics? Well, it does for me so I give your creative pen 5 * * * * *, a favorite author and favorite story mark.

Can't wait to read the next chapters, thank you for sharing this with us MAR5!

Totally original and brilliant. Glad you added that May had been slurping up all the love juices through out the nights goings on between mother and son. It seemed such a waste of juices and loss of depth to the eroticism to negate May of such pleasures. Well done!