All Comments on 'The Prince's Servitude Pt. 01'

I love this so far! I can’t wait to see what happens next, the idea of being the little prince is so hot!!!

More please!

Loving it so far. Great writing and storytelling!

Nice start to the tale.

Good so far, but make sure to stick to narrating in First Person, some Third was creeping in there

Great story. It sometimes takes me a moment to think about what you want to convey due to verb tenses changing within the same paragraph or thought. I don’t know if you are using a voice recognition tool but mine also does that and produces wrong pronouns. I know it is a very helpful tool to speed up the process however it just takes some more time in the editing process. Please keep going as I know what you are saying and I look forward to reading the next chapter.

I LOVE this story and setting. It could have easily turned violent (turn off for me) but the sexual tension between the 2 and Loukas' sexy soft-Dom personality is so hot!

Fantastic start! When I read the title and one line summary, I knew this story was not going to disappoint!

I was hoping he would ask his mother why does she have that book and how does she know about men's pleasures. 👀👀👀