All Comments on 'The Princess and I'

looking forward to read

cant wait for the next chapter.

Love it. Please add more soon :)

This was great! More! More! More!

Loved It! Please write more!!

Those previous comments looked as if one person wrote them all, but what the hell. Anyway, I felt like the first part of the story was better. In the second part you used too many "as". Get an editior or read the chapter a couple of times before submitting.

very enjoyable, really hope you do another chapter.

A very enjoyable read, especially for a non-consent. 5-stars.

Hey cant wait for the next one. Really good :)

This is a fantastic story, but you really need an editor. I don't mean to offend, but it sounds like English is not your first language. I look forward to reading more from you in the future... edited.

Oh may there please be a continuation of this :D! I absolutely adored it and this is most definetly one of my favorites. I search high and low for just the right stories of my preference and you have surely given a perfect one.

I would have loved if this was an actual novel.. please do continue it... its fantastic!!

BUT. You really do need an editor to tighten the grammar and punctuation up some and maybe go into more detail of the intercourse sections. I would definitely enjoy reading a sequel (edited, however).

There definitely needs to be more chapters added to this. It is the beginning of something great (I think) :)...

Please write a sequel as it will be interesting to see how their relationship develops!

I think the story would be good, but I didn't even finish it due to the grammar errors.

if you could continue and make chapters of this story, i'll be your first reader <3

Really enjoyed this story and I would love to read about what happens over the next few days and her reaction when she discovers who he really is.

Other then the grammar and a bit of repetition, it was a very sweet story and hope you continue.

Early hours are no excuse. Should have fixed it before submitting.

THIS was seriously written? i thought it was just a clever satire on correct grammer and mis-use of words. ooops!

This is one of the best stories I've read so far, please make it a sequel

Super awesome story!! :)) Many of us must've been so lost in the story's magic that dismal grammar hardly mattered!! ;)) tragedy is, you never wrote again here after 2010....being too busy as a medic!! :((;)) getting your choice of editors might've helped!! :))

please sequel!!!!

Great story! I was so into it, I didn’t notice any mistakes. It would be nice if you continued it; or even write another, different story.

Hey, totally think your story was great. Very sophisticated tone and language, however I do think that you could have slowed down a lot more. Everything happened too quickly, I would have loved to experience more intimacy outside the bedroom before the wedding. Maybe you could have built their relationship up a little, but that's just me. Keep up the great work x

Can’t wait to read the next story. I love it. I can’t wait to see her response

Brilliant nonconsent story, rarely one finds such a gem in this category BDSM and pain is a major put off.

Disguise - love affair - secret identity of King/future spouses = brilliant mix of a romantic princess movie.

Hope it continues.