All Comments on 'The Princess Transformed Ch. 02'

by izenrann

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edwards21edwards21almost 7 years ago
Great story, but some issues.

I just want to say, I'm a big fan of this series you have going on.

But this story published with some fairly off putting errors in the text. Paragraph positions are occasionally wrong, sometimes changing paragraphs in the middle of a sentence. And in at least one case (naive), you failed to delete an editor's note. As good as the story is, errors like that take me out of it, and I can't be the only one.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Very interested to see where the story goes.

izenrannizenrannalmost 7 years agoAuthor

Hi, the author here! Sorry about all the formatting errors and such. Still learning about Literotica every day. I apologise wholeheartedly for them, not very professional of me.

I'm glad you like the story, and I do hope you'll stick with me for the whole ride! I'm going to finish it, promise :)

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