All Comments on 'The Prisoner - Location Alpha'

by IntrovertedDyke

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice storyline

Loved the build up. Would have been even better if there was no sex until the next chapter tho. Nice work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
yummm

Ok totally not what i was expecting but cant wait to see what happens with the three of them next

Slurpy29Slurpy29about 4 years ago
Nice start

Very imaginative story, a little far out there, but I enjoyed it. You did a nice job building the based of the story. Really looking forward to what comes next.

Candy_Kane54Candy_Kane54about 4 years ago

I've loved both of your stories so far. I'm looking forward to what comes next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Agreed with other comments

Very unique story line. This was not what I was expecting to read but I was entertained while reading it so good job. I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Damn.

That was hot. Also fucked up, with the mom and all her shit. But I loved the passion between the main characters, even when apart, their love, anger & despair burned bright for each other

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