by IntrovertedDyke
Loved the build up. Would have been even better if there was no sex until the next chapter tho. Nice work
Ok totally not what i was expecting but cant wait to see what happens with the three of them next
Very imaginative story, a little far out there, but I enjoyed it. You did a nice job building the based of the story. Really looking forward to what comes next.
I've loved both of your stories so far. I'm looking forward to what comes next.
Very unique story line. This was not what I was expecting to read but I was entertained while reading it so good job. I look forward to reading more.
That was hot. Also fucked up, with the mom and all her shit. But I loved the passion between the main characters, even when apart, their love, anger & despair burned bright for each other