All Comments on 'The Prisoner Within'

by smallncute

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RachalCaronRachalCaronalmost 16 years ago
Sex slave

Loved the premise, the hoplessness of the situation, the vulnerability. You have the ability of making your stories so very real, Miranda... and if you ever need a new sex slave, you know where to find me baby.

pixie2002pixie2002almost 16 years ago
Smallncute's stories always make me think . . .

. . . always make me feel . . . always make me wet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Pressure, Vulnerability, and Need

I liked this one a LOT. I read smallncute's essay on rape fantasies, and pretty much agree with what she said. I like the idea of a woman being pressured into sex with another woman, but the pressure should be psychological, not physical. I like the vulnerability in this story, and the way Miranda made Kate need her protection. And the boot fuck was mad hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
enjoyed it.

The characters were good. The only thing that let it down for me was the setting. I don't really enjoy prison stories, especially ones where there is violence. The sexual side of it was good, although the Miranda character kinda blackmailed her into it, I just hope that they later find romance with one another.

Caitlyn

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
A bit violent for my tastes, but very arousing

Very well written. It seems the author has knowledge of both the court and prison system. She definitely has knowledge of submission and lesbian behavior. smallncute never disappoints.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I like it.

Hi we talked earlier and I guess disconnected during our conversation. This was a nice read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
'/Enticing

Very well written.....made me hot....thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

ok

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Too bad she was acquitted, this promised. Can't you put her back un jail?

thomas_deanthomas_deanover 1 year ago

Cellies: New Inmate Kate finds a friend

Convicted the story strongly suggests of infanticide, Kate lands in prison as the pirrahiah of the cell block. Beaten by other inmates, Kate is offered a refuge by Miranda, a martial arts expert. They both like men, but get along so well that after they get out they live together.

Christina the blogster who reports on women in prison and their ever - after - stories has kept up with some of her prison friends. She also reports that in many prison relationships, release is the end of the line.

It's a well told story and I agree George was not worthy of Kate.

Anonymous
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