All Comments on 'The Procurist Ch. 01'

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kiwiplumkiwiplumover 12 years ago
Good start

Glad that you pointed out that she'd just taken the pill that was preventing another panic attack, I was assuming she'd have one once he took her to the cellar. Bit of a rude awakening!

Crystal13Crystal13over 12 years ago
Great start ....

Keep them coming.... Can't wait to read more!!

scubasam61scubasam61over 12 years ago
Please continue

Nice start to what can become a great LONG and continual story

6FootChick6FootChickover 12 years ago
Good One!

Oh this is going to be a good story! I can't wait to see the next chapters. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A Good Start That Goes Downhill Fast

It is truly a shame that such wonderful writing talent is going to waste. This was a lovely chapter, but those that follow (for example, chapter three) are just disgusting.

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