All Comments on 'The Prodigal and the Pack Pt. 03'

by dsm_76

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I'm enjoying the story so far. It's a genre I like, the characters are interesting and drawn well. The few grammar and autocorrect mistakes I'm seeing aren't at all off-putting. The storyline sounds like it could go in some fun directions. One thing... Could the chapters possibly be a little longer? I just settle down to read and get back into the ebb and flow of the story and we hit the end of another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I like the story just wish the chapters where longer. Just when it get interesting the chapter is finish

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please make the chapters longer. They are hot but far too short.

dsm_76dsm_76almost 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for all the comments. There are 9 chapters in this story, all of them are complete. The chapters get longer as the story progresses. Thanks for reading!

Michrick1Michrick1almost 3 years ago

This is the first time I have read this kind of story because I did not think I would like reading about creatures. As it turns out I find these story very sexy and am enjoying it very much. Looking forward to find out what happens with Zack and the werewolf brothers. Thank you for introducing me to sex between the supernatural and humans

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