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Click hereI blushed and he laughed a deep, happy laugh. "I love you, Lil. I will fuck you for as long as you will take my cock."
I leaned over and kissed him gently, cuddling up to his side. "I love you too."
This came out of left field, "That's my good little whore," During their first sexual encounter he didn't have to say that. Almost made me not want to finish the rest of the story. Otherwise I enjoyed the rest.
Yes, very hot half brother, and sister. Maybe they'll get married, have kids, then she'll become the loving wife while he's off at work. Oh Lil, you little slut! Yes, she becomes a slut for an artist that catches her eye. Just a dirty thought for you.
It's too good to only one chapter..........
Rapier
It's a really hot story, but it shifts too much from sweetness to him wanting her to be his slut and dominating her. If he wanted her that bad for that long, he'd probably just fuck the hell out of her, not play games. Teasing, I can see. But if there's a part two, and there should be, I'd suggest figuring that out.
Well done!
You have created a stirring narrative to an old theme. Your descriptive writing style got my hormones kicking along nicely; which, after all, is the aim of erotica.
I look forward to reading your next story.