by JakeQuadrad
A believable progression of a first time at college and pretty hot. "Her face turned so red I can't even see her freckles" - great descriptive line. Her shyness contrasting with her iron determination to get things going was very endearing. Progression from massage to panties off seemed too rapid, though. Most off-putting was the tense shifting from past to present tense many times. Overall a good first story with sweet, caring characters. Thanks.