All Comments on 'The Project Can Wait'

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SyleusSnowSyleusSnowabout 2 years ago

A believable progression of a first time at college and pretty hot. "Her face turned so red I can't even see her freckles" - great descriptive line. Her shyness contrasting with her iron determination to get things going was very endearing. Progression from massage to panties off seemed too rapid, though. Most off-putting was the tense shifting from past to present tense many times. Overall a good first story with sweet, caring characters. Thanks.

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I wanna write an action-epic light novel one day, but to get my skills to that level I write porn hehe