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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 7 years ago
Sorry

No matter how hard I tried I just couldn't get into this story , ok i know it is made up but I can not see a teacher treating her student the way she did, sorry but I did not read anything about love, all I read was how her teacher took her and caused her pain but this is just my opinion

GymTeacherYouDeserveGymTeacherYouDeserveover 7 years agoAuthor
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I understand that this story is not for everybody.

PLEASE read the message at the beginning...if you do not enjoy butch/femme pairings and large age differences, then don't read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I READ IT AND IT WORKS

Your forward set my open-minded reading cap prior to beginning and I appreciate the head's up on that. I did not read part one, yet.

The piece of work told a straight forward story of learning and salacious experiences which are common to and sexual learning experience. Well, for those of us who sway toward live human contact. It was good on this level.

That thick bush fragrant from excitement was especially hot for me. The honesty of dialogue and emotional response to a given situation was spot on for these characters.

I think you should continue to write, and include your opening statements.

GueishaGueishaover 7 years ago
So in love

With every part of your story I fall mlre in love with ciara and cj ! PLEASEE keep on writing their story and make it bigger plaseee.. 2 pages aren't enough tl their love ♡

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Incredible story

Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story

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Hello, and thank you so much for reading! My stories take place in the fictional city of Thatcher Blake. I prefer to read stories that take place in the past--before computers and cell phones took over our lives. I prefer to leave it up to you, the reader, to decide what yea...

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