by GymTeacherYouDeserve
No matter how hard I tried I just couldn't get into this story , ok i know it is made up but I can not see a teacher treating her student the way she did, sorry but I did not read anything about love, all I read was how her teacher took her and caused her pain but this is just my opinion
I understand that this story is not for everybody.
PLEASE read the message at the beginning...if you do not enjoy butch/femme pairings and large age differences, then don't read it.
Your forward set my open-minded reading cap prior to beginning and I appreciate the head's up on that. I did not read part one, yet.
The piece of work told a straight forward story of learning and salacious experiences which are common to and sexual learning experience. Well, for those of us who sway toward live human contact. It was good on this level.
That thick bush fragrant from excitement was especially hot for me. The honesty of dialogue and emotional response to a given situation was spot on for these characters.
I think you should continue to write, and include your opening statements.
With every part of your story I fall mlre in love with ciara and cj ! PLEASEE keep on writing their story and make it bigger plaseee.. 2 pages aren't enough tl their love ♡