All Comments on 'The Proposal Ch. 02'

Wow! I think I'm in love! I like the way you make these sex scenes rock, man! Keep 'em coming!

I love these four friends, but I have to say I'm very much a Rick fan! Maybe I'm even a lil bit in love with the guy! *smiles* I love this...but you know it already! Looking forward to the next chapter.

I LOVE the concept of shared emotions and experiences. A little like the movie ‘inception’. However, the constant back and forth repeating of the love making from each ones experience was a bit repetitive, disconcerting and distracting. This is just my opinion and still a 4.90 in my view so I will give it a 5 for your benefit ! I look forward to reading the rest of the chapters in this story :)

The alternating paragraphs of each participant's mind bubble is very engaging, a little more intimate than the usual third party narration. Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.