All Comments on 'The Proposal Ch. 02'

More chapters soon, I hope... Love the way this is going...Could it be, his soon to be mother-in-law, or/and bride are behind this...? Just thinking out loud, there... 5 stars

Hugs and Kisses Betty jo xoxo

This story had alot of promise, but like most author's in this category, they do a great job at writing about the rage of being forced, then drop the ball in the character actually standing their ground. This one just gives in, with no plan, no quitting and leaving, like most would do. Job or not, a normal guy is not going to put on women's clothes and watch hypno videos for hours on end. Even if the MC didn't get into a fallout, he would have sit the asshole down to say I can't do this. Also, why the secrecy with his wife? If he didn't tell her the first day, he sure as hell would tell her when the freaky shit started, or she would start thinking worse was happening. By now she knows her man is a fuck up. Concept is good. Execution, not so much. To me anyway.