All Comments on 'The Protector'

An 18 year old is NOT a runaway. She left home!

misleading title, 18yr old are not runaways. wastes a lot of time amounting to nothing but some bella swan stuff.

I find it interesting that the comments to date suggest a person has to be under 18 to be considered a runaway. The girl in this situation is naive and taken advantage of by an online suitor. She IS running away from her parents, life, and home in search of a fantasy. As always comments both negative and positive are welcome otherwise I can not continue to grow as an author.

I rather liked it despite the ranawaygate saga people seem to be caught up on 😉. I did feel it finished rather fast, would have liked to read more about Meghan and Terry at the end but overall a great read.

agree she was not a runaway she still left home without telling her parents, I know it was part of the overall part of the story but I hate the abuse, I also knew that Terry was going to save her when he heard her give the address to the cab driver.

Overall I enjoyed the story very much five stars.

I loved reading this one and you had me feeling like I was there.. Except for the end.

I admit I was disappointed by the quick ending. I wanted time to pass and then read the juicy details, as the reader does at every other stage of this story. But overall a great read :)

Loved the story itself the way the guy came in to save her had me forever hooked! The title had me interested too! Would have loved to have seen meghan take more revenge but a normal person in that state probably wouldnt have taken revenge themselves either but again LOVED IT!

That is the only way to make things very difficult to recover the file.

It’s fucking ridiculous that he has the nerve to call himself her protector.

Or is it because he’s not as much of a monster as Max is that makes him a “good guy”??

All right, Terry! He's the man! :D

modern day fairy tail i wish all stupid cunts who willingly fell into the trap of rapist like max are lucky to have a terry as their knight in armor