All Comments on 'The Protege'

This is wonderful! I have been trying, in my own writing, to get at the idea that Dominance/submission should NOT be a relationship of Mistress (or Master) to mindless slave, but a symbiotic relationship between two strong, self-actualized people made possible by their 'power exchange.' You have succeeded here, better than I think I ever will, as fiction is not my genre. I will keep trying, but will remember this triumph. Thank you.

I love the description of locations, the attention to detail and the enormous effort that the author puts into character development that helps me invest. I love the often subtle D/s dynamic that leverages on the real love, affection and real life emotions of this type of relationship. Well done, please keep going and definitely 5 Stars from me.

Thank you Denker42 and Eruditeporn for your very kind comments. Coming from excellent writers such as you makes them even more gratifying.