All Comments on 'The Pulse Pt. 02'

Can't wait for the next part. Story getting intriguing!

Excellent story. Excellent writing. Excellent command of English,

I've just finished both parts and am looking forward to your next episode. You're one of the very few writers who posts material devoid of errors, whether spelling or grammatical. Nothing distracts from the flow of the story. The characters are good and realistic and the sex scenes are well written and don't swamp the storyline.

Great tale well told. Great references to Blackadder, though I do wonder how many of your global readers will get them. Hope you can sort his relationships out so he doesn’t hurt anyone - he’s a nice guy, and walking over either Jennifer or Fiona wouldn’t fit. Keep going please.

Very good story until now , I'm sick of fairy tales tough. Please keep it on the believeable side and don't make the hero a Superhero or something less human please. I hope the Pulse can have a scientific explanation and limited powers maybe?

Brava! Well written story so far! Pleasure to read!

So well written. I am loving this. I am looking forward to Celia and Jennifer teaming up!

He's going to struggle to get into Pharmaceutical science if he has to cheat to pass chemistry. And without even a perfunctory clean up, Jennifer would have surely detected what he'd been up to with her Mum. Quibbles aside, this is easily 5 stars. Keep it up.

Excellent story, like the Black Adder and Many Coloured Land references.

Main character seems a decent kid, so not sure why he's stringing several different girls. He's going to end up causing a world of hurt.

I'm reminded of Ghost Busters, "don't cross the streams". Harold Ramos.

Still good advice for Jake to. Glad you brought up limits of his power, I wouldn't want to run out of power at a crucial moment.

This is a delight to read