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SMACK
"Touch the Queen's body again and you will be beaten until you understand!"
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More tears flooded out of my eyes as I tried to wriggle out of Natalia's hard grip. My struggle caused the lips of my lower region to rub together. The friction caused me to moan in pleasure, even as my backside was ablaze from the torrent of slaps Natalia was delivering to my upturned ass. I was so close to cumming when all of a sudden the slapping stopped and I was jerked upright.
"Cum without the permission of the Queen and I will personally deliver you to the punishment chambers, where you will stay for a week!" Natalia threatened.
"HAVE I MADE MYSELF CLEAR!"
I swallowed a sob, and nodded. I hated Natalia. I hated this place. I hated my father, and I hated how I felt myself slowly becoming a feverish sex addict all because of the aphrodisiac.
Natalia's grip on my arm tightened.
"Wipe your face slave. It's time to go see the Queen," she announced before all but dragging me out of the room.
I can't stay here. This isn't going to be my life. I vowed to run away and set myself free at the first chance I got. Only with this thought running through my mind was I able to let slave Natalia lead me to Queen Ambrosia's suit at the other end of the palace.
- COMMENTS
yukonnightsabout 4 years agoI read this in response to your request for feedback on the Forum. I think you did a nice job on this first effort. The other comments seem to indicate the same. Congratulations, and I hope this is just the beginning of a fun adventure of writing.
Crusader235about 4 years agoWell that was a fun quick read. Hoping there's allot more to Cum! Thank you for it.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoAn excellent 1st attempt at writing. Do not worry about the English professors and spoilers who live to pick a work apart. It was a great first chapter. I hope you continue it. I think your story line has promise and look forward to where it can go.3X
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI noted the previous comment and yes you could use a good editor. Nothing unusual there very few of us can write error free. I definately can't. Look I just misspelled definitely. That said I love your story and really hope you continue. For a first attempt it's awesome. And I look forward to the next chapter. Will she attempt to escape? Will she learn to submit? Please, please don't give up.
