All Comments on 'The Quislin Factor'

by BradentonLarry

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Well done. I loved the build up. Please continue this. I'll read your other works while I wait. Looking forward to them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A lot of fun!

Once DM'd a D&D adventure that had a lot of sex in the game, with pictures from adult comics to help visualize. Had to fuck more than fight. The whole group - 3 girls and 2 guys - had a great time.

But we didn't act out the scenes, just talked through them. Your way was much more fun! 5*s for the memory.

AlexaDrakeAlexaDrakeover 4 years ago
Great Story

Really enjoyed this, nice build up with lots of sexy action.

edwards21edwards21over 4 years ago
Welcome back!

Great story. Loved your older stuff, glad you're back at it. This one lives up to your rep for sure!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love Love Love

I read this story last night, and I can't stop thinking about it. Please write more of this. I even wish it was a made into a porno.

SeverinskissSeverinskissover 4 years ago
Natural 20

Loved this, reminded me of my own D&D weekend campaign at college. When on the 2nd night, the lounge we were using for the sleepover turned into an impromptu all party fuck fest. My first orgy and the most memorable one. Proof positive that RPG’s are a gateway drug to hell and damnation.

northparkbinorthparkbiabout 4 years ago
Well...

fifth edition rules are different than the 2d edition i used to play. :)

GabrielDPGabrielDPabout 4 years ago
Damn...

Agree with NorthParkBi - 5th edition is WAY different than my old 2nd edition days! THIS is why we needed more girls to play D&D back then! ;) Great story!

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