All Comments on 'The Rabbit Died Ch. 01'

And funny as all hell. Looking forward to part 2.

For a first submission, this story was great! This sounds like a truly fun couple who knows how to enjoy themselves, both inside the tent and out. Excellent descriptions and a lot of humor. I identified with John with his nervousness about the signals he thought (wished?) he was getting from Jeanne, especially with him having 3 sexy young co-workers there with him urging him to try to bed this woman. Please, PL69, don't make us wait to find out what these sexy senior citizens do next!

Just love the romance and humour..Please keep writing

Don't worry about the so called literary critics..DO NOT CHANGE your style.!

This was such a great story. It was well-written, funny, touching and romantic. You made me care about this couple, and I definitely want to see where you take them. A great first effort. Thank you for sharing.