All Comments on 'The Rak-Sasha Ch. 01'

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maestro84maestro84over 6 years ago
Wow!

Yay finally! So happy this has posted, such a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Nice use of word Wow!

Your wording is top notch wow!

BluejayzzzBluejayzzzabout 2 years ago

Erotic, but the tense shifts and poor punctuation made it difficult to enjoy. You need to find a good editor.

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