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TheLongGamerTheLongGamerabout 1 year ago

I'm sorry I loved the past 2 chapters, but couldn't follow a lot of this one. It was often unclear which character was which, who was speaking to whom about what.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Rip Dawson's Nads off!

LeakyFaucitLeakyFaucitabout 1 year agoAuthor

@TheLongGamer - Yep, working on that, having an idea is easy, writing it down for others to read causes you to

realize there is a freaking rubric to this stuff and your back in college english class with 400 teachers and I'm the only student, these are older chapters I need to edit better..

DezinteriqDezinteriqabout 1 year ago

Cold and as slowly as possible, also if you could link ch. 3 and 4 and next ones to the first two will be great

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