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dontyouwishyouknewdontyouwishyouknew9 months ago

Keep this story going, I like it. Your unorthodox comma usage can be very distracting, tho.

lassidor1lassidor19 months ago

two request: on the persona bit an indication of class and lvl. Second, make some sort of indication when a scene changes. it's confusing when adjacent sentences are on wholly different topics.

1Sam20231Sam20239 months ago

Enjoying it. Keep it up

daves_not_heredaves_not_here9 months ago

I'm really enjoying this series; I can't wait to see what happens next!

Why are the last 3 chapters out of the series?

Thanks

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