by Lion24655
Absolutly perfect perverted take on fairy tales. I'll never look at them the same way again. Hmmmm...now how do I get through reading them to the gkids!?! LOL
And very well-told it was, Lion24655. You have got something of a winner here, I think - but do read through very carefully before posting anything. Did you really want to tell us it was a fairy-tail?
Thank you - five stars.
Enjoyed your tale, and look forward to more- there are so many fairy tales to draw inspiration from. Oh, the literary possibilities!
You had me until the last one. Because he failed with Mary and his reputation is ruined and he is out of business, and why you ask...after the rape Mary has become an even harder and more sadistic lesbian who has added turning the male servants into sissy boys. RAPE BY THE OPPOSITE SEX WILL NOT TURN SOMEONE STRAIGHT.
Whilst strangely aroused, a combination that has me thinking you are on to a winner!
I loved your writing, although a few small errors which a read through or editor could have helped with, but they did not detract from a very clever story.
The possibilities for further chapters are endless and i hope to see them posted soon.
Well done, 5 stars for making my morning a happy one.