All Comments on 'The Rearrangement Room: Zeke'

When the "magic" is explained its full of too many rules and distracts from the story even if its a needed part. Maybe put the rules into the story so that it flows more. Also, you need an editor. There are too many grammatical errors and misspelling. I think this would be a nice story but the actions above plus the dialogue in some places is a bit too awkward and not realistic.