All Comments on 'The Rebound Ch. 01'

I liked the context before the story and your description of Nychelle and her great body. After a certain point in the story, I would of like to have seen the sex expanded on, Nychelle's sex dialogue was hot! Maybe add more of that in the scenes and really describe the sex scenes with these big bottom goddesses, get the reader in the action! Can't wait to read the next chapter, awesome work.

No idea why this story is rated so low. People just hating lol. Keep’em coming #GOATMondo

Loved this one. I read all of yours but I like that the guy isn't a bitch in this one

I just wish I could understand the speech. Was it even English or maybe Carribean? Too hard to decypher.

I find the woman's speech hard to understand, otherwise this story is head and shoulders above most that are rated 4.5 on this site!

This reads more like a novel than amateur literotica work. And I would know, being ShakySpear.

5 stars from me.

Easy to see why this is rated so low, no one can understand it.

RAW he should have filled he with 3loads before she went back to his soon to be exwife