All Comments on 'The Rebound Train'

I enjoyed that

Close your eyes and you are there... Very erotic.

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I know the story was very short for this site; but it just felt like it was done. I did not want to just put in a lot of fluff just for word count! Quality over quantity! :)

Totally erotic. A delicious sensual treat. Like all treats it was short and sweet and leaves one hungry for more! Please keep on writing! I want to see more, no, I need to see more!

Really intense and erotic story. Woman making love on the train, with other men watching and participating, getting pregnant... Beautiful attention to details. My favorite part was: "I felt you start to build with your balls slapping against my clit. I have never been taken like that. So once more I came. This time my pussy was spasming along your shaft, milking it. That was what pushed you over the edge. That is when you sprayed my cervix with your seed."

Keep up the great work, you are really talented. I am a young bisexual man, pretty creative, and also passionate. If you'd like to exchange ideas or erotic stories, or chat, email me at

tralala98@gmx.com

Privacy and respect guaranteed. If you are not interested, that is OK.

I found this as you you read my story. This was a wonderful tale and I hope my writing will evolve to evoke the image you did.

A lovely story and thanks for writing and sharing it. Please write some more.