All Comments on 'The Recruit'

Welcome back ggf. Thanks for posting another superb story. I loved the slow build up. And as always the sex was HOT!

love reading these better stories, but 17 pages at once is a bit much! would like to see it broke down over about 3 days! keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!

This was a great story. A lot of good sex and an amusing plot. I found your writing style kept me interested all the way through the end.

However, it may be too long for a contest entry. Many readers, I fear, will give up when they see 17 pages in length. My only complaint is that I saw no real connection to the contest theme. Thanks for writing.

I thought it ran a little long even though the action was enough to keep it interesting. A really good story, very entertaining (and that's why I read, to be entertained).

A page turner! I disagree about the length. This is a well proportioned story which the author had decided not to break up into annoying parts, although there are 4 convenient chapters. The sex is realistic and exciting and the author has a delighful sense of humour missing in so many stories on here.

This man should be writing for the top shelf!

My boyfriend (I am 44) spends long periods away, this type of story is an ideal substitute, I read it in one go and slept well afterwards!

I hope this story wins, it has turned me on the most so far, but then I am biased because I live in London and know Stratford very well, very authentic. Mel, Croydon. .

GCF always writes at great length and this one no exception. Great plot, great sex, look forward to the next one AF

I don't normally read guy stories, I prefer to read what women are thinking in their dirty minds, but this one stood out because I was recently a recruit myself, to the delivery division of a carpet company, and the writer is English like me.

Okay I haven't got to fuck anyone in the company, all the women there are dogs, but Tom paints a pretty good picture if there really was someone tasty there.

The story was a bit long, but I stayed awake long enough to stick with it and was rewarded in the end. I rewarded myself, ha ha, I wish I had your stamina Tom, that Helen sounded pretty fuckable.. But alas she wasn't real, they never are, are they! Mandy, supposedly the real one in his story, I could really go for, just my type of slut. Let me know when you are finished fucking her, Tom :-)

I like this author, not just because he's a Brit but the way he writes, he writes a complete story and not just a wank fix. I thought his English Affair was pretty good, but this one is even better, very believable.. Roll on the next one!

It has romance, sex and humor, essential ingredients to every story. Five out of five. Sarah CA

But okay. Good writing

Whatever this guy is on, I want some!

Great fantasy...but come on? Who fucks four different women on one weekend?

Good jerk-off material though

Sex right at the outstart, I like that, even though it was only a dream, but it got my attention. Clever integration between the characters. The author keeps the interest going throughout, and plenty of dialogue to break up the descriptive bits.

The sex was a bit exagerrated, but who doesn't do that? I know I do!

What an amazing ride. Excellent writing; conjures vivid images in my brain.

Thank you for sharing this work.

Finally completed all your stories.

Did well utilisation of this quarantine period.

Love to read more from you.

I read a couple of pages and I want to burn every one of these assholes... Fucking scum.

So long-wided. The whole thing could be summed up in two pages, but all the characters have VERBAL DIARRHEA, even when they should be fucking instead of talking. EXTREMELY ANNOYING. I mean, these idiots have entire conversations about utter bullshit right WHILE they are at it! Come on...

The story does 𝗡𝗢𝗧 belong in this category. There's not a proper sex scene. What sex there is, it's total SHIT. And the protagonist is fucking slime.

What a waste of time. 1*