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All Comments on 'The Recruiter Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A bit of confusion that a proofreader would have spotted right off. Was the jerk Ronnie or Donnie?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Needs a proof reader: Looser? it's loser. And "carrier" it's career.

57Leonard57Leonardover 2 years ago

Another vote for a proofreader. Loose and lose are not interchangeable. Neither are your and you’re

or it’s and its.

kinked_a_bitkinked_a_bitover 2 years ago

Don't let the Nellies bother you. It's a fine start that left me wanting more. Well done!

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