All Comments on 'The Red Bride Denuded'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Well, a really good start to a long and loving adventure for her. There were no details of their time together before the contract was signed. What disturbs me is that there is no safe word or gesture that is in the contract that would indicate that she was in distress. For a Dom and sub to have a good relationship, there has to be some limits and a deep understanding of trust. Without that trust, such a relationship cannot thrive. He could make her drink out of a toilet or degrade herself during her period. He could beat her until she is unconscious without providing any aftercare. Oh, he says that he will care care of her but that is not specified in the contract. Only if she lasts more than a year does she get $50,000. What happens if she wants out beforehand? How many brands can he put on her? How many piercings, and where? How many tattoos can he put on her? Sounds pretty good for her but there are so many unanswered questions. Good luck, girl.

VitavieVitavie12 months agoAuthor

Dear Anonymous,

The first third the story is how they met and how their relationship developed. So, about the time before the contract.

And, yes, I should have included a clause about the safeword. As you say, the safeword principle is key to BDSM.

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Vitavie is of mixed European extraction. She studied maths and art history in Germany. After a less than glorious employment history, through lack of motivation, but a lively social life, she married a business man and converted to being a socialite. She writes essentially in...