All Comments on 'The Red Crusade'

Obviously part of a larger series. I will have to check out the other stories you have posted.

but one thing that is quite wrong - and worryingly I see this an awful lot on here especially from male writers - is the hymen is NOT internal. As majority of the stories here are erotic, therefore focus is often on anatomy, some research really should be conducted. The hymen is a thin membrane that covers the ENTRANCE to the vagina, just inside the labia. It is NOT deep inside.

Apart from that, a good story.

Curse myself! Always overthinking these stories instead of just enjoying them! This one made me sad D: The guy was a nice guy, almost done with his work so he could retire to a nice bit of land, and bam. He gets killed. D: