All Comments on 'The Red Dominatrix'

You make me wish I could vote lower than one star. I want to vote NEGATIVE stars for this story.

Not only did you slaughter this story with misspelled, misused, and misplaced words... Not only did you punctuate (or fail to punctuate) to the point where I had to stop, go back and re-read, only to ask "What the fuck do they mean?!"... But your actual story, even if it didn't have all the errors in spelling and grammar, you actual story was horrible! And SOPHIE MARCEAU was your personal assistant? Why stop there? Is Monica Bellucci your chauffeur? Is Olivia Wilde your gardener? Who cleans your toilets? Olga Kurylenko?

Do yourself (and EVERYONE ELSE) a favor, and stop. Just stop. In fact, you're not allowed to READ the stories on this site anymore, let alone WRITE anything else.

I wish I too could vote with negative stars. This was one of the worse stories I've read here. Keep writing if you must but label your stories as "For man-hating, lesbian, doms"

Please get an editor. You really, really need one. Awful story.

The story line was horrible and in dire need of editing.

I agree with the editing comments, but there are so few females writing on femdom that it would be a shame to lose one. If you can't find someone to look over your story prior to posting, let me know.

With simply horrible dialogue. UGH!

He has signed on for the rest of his life. He learns every day what dominated means