- BDSM
- The Red Dominatrix
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"No. I am the one who must give an apology! I'm a weak coward, Mistress Schwarz! I must be grateful for the gift of being punished by a Goddess like you!"
There were tears running down his cheeks.
I nodded, smiling, and got up.
"Ok!" I said. "Sophie could you be so kind to take Mister Baker to his cell, please. Looks like in need of a little rest."
"So I had to dump the bloke on the old wine cellar next to the stable? No way. My shoes will get muddy!"
"Oh! C'mon! Then put him on the basement of this house. I will get a shower. And hurry up. Remember that I have a date today at noon!"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 5 years agoHe has signed on for the rest of his life. He learns every day what dominated means
rdoolittleover 8 years agoI agree with the editing comments, but there are so few females writing on femdom that it would be a shame to lose one. If you can't find someone to look over your story prior to posting, let me know.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThe story line was horrible and in dire need of editing.
Anonymousover 8 years agoPlease get an editor. You really, really need one. Awful story.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI wish I too could vote with negative stars. This was one of the worse stories I've read here. Keep writing if you must but label your stories as "For man-hating, lesbian, doms"
Epiphany_Jonesover 8 years agoYou make me wish I could vote lower than one star. I want to vote NEGATIVE stars for this story.
Not only did you slaughter this story with misspelled, misused, and misplaced words... Not only did you punctuate (or fail to punctuate) to the point where I had to stop, go back and re-read, only to ask "What the fuck do they mean?!"... But your actual story, even if it didn't have all the errors in spelling and grammar, you actual story was horrible! And SOPHIE MARCEAU was your personal assistant? Why stop there? Is Monica Bellucci your chauffeur? Is Olivia Wilde your gardener? Who cleans your toilets? Olga Kurylenko?
Do yourself (and EVERYONE ELSE) a favor, and stop. Just stop. In fact, you're not allowed to READ the stories on this site anymore, let alone WRITE anything else.
