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estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Interesting

Has potential, but you need to edit your copy before submitting. Sentences like "Kim called to talk to me and said her and said her mother had a dress I could borrow to wear to the party and I should stop by her house to try it on." have no place in a story. It puts me off reading the rest.

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