All Comments on 'The Referendum Ch. 05'

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EmirusEmirusover 5 years ago
The end?

I assume from the title of this episode you’ve decided to bring this story to an end? Assuming you have I wondered why. Short episodes, as I think I’ve said before, tend not to receive the best recognition and I think 2/3 pages is best. But also, unlike your other two current works, it had a very standard plot and I wondered if that has been a factor?

subootssubootsover 5 years agoAuthor
Conclusion

I really felt that it had nowhere else to go, apart from repetition of previous scenes. I am working on The Legacy, and also a new project The Student. I take on board your comment regarding length of chapters.

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