All Comments on 'The Refugee Predicament'

Can’t wait to see what happens to poor Layla!!!!

I can't wait for more. I hope Layla is pregnant by the end of it.

4 Stars, nice start, I was a little surprised Darren didn't take advantage or her when he saw what was in the bag, who knows, maybe in chapter 2?

This shows some talent. Nice story. A bit rushed in places and thr viewpoint shifts are jarring at times. But this is a very solid story.

Please continue!

very good!

I can't help but see a similarity in this and "The house on mango street", even though Layla and Esperanza (from mango street) are different ethnicities, they both fall to similar consequences of being r***d. In addition, both come from struggling households and dream of being something great.

This story is complete plagiarism of

Pet Teacher by DavidHog

and absolute delight story with already 18 chapters

and hope we get more