All Comments on 'The Regiment Ch. 07: Op Tour Bonus'

I must say that I miss Andy and his hairy chest. I hoped to read another chapter about Andy!

You are absolutely right. Thank you for remembering him.

I had intended for Andy to reappear at the end of this story put it was already 8,500 words so I wanted to bring it to a close. I will see if I can have him as the protagonist in another story in the future.

G_P

I'm fascinated by the idea that Jen isn't just a slut, she actually has a sense of duty and wants to feel that she's achieving something, and is actually earning her place in the regiment by being an asset.

Read in combination with the earlier parts (although this part could be read as a standalone) this is a really interesting progression.

The sex is vivid and well written, one thought I have though is that you're moving a little away from the idea that Laura is a soldier, that what she is doing is not just for her own gratification but has a larger purpose.