All Comments on 'The Relationship That Never Was'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

More! I look forward to more from this offer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This one was very thought provoking, definitely not a typical boiler plate story. Thanks for thinking outside of the box. KS

Wolfden999Wolfden999almost 2 years ago

Weird. But I loved it

payenbrantpayenbrantover 1 year ago

Very thought provoking and they are both nut jobs. Though Marcus is at least logical. Vicky as a feminist is going to have a very tough road to travel. Hopefully she can get herself in sync. A very good take, though an uncomfortable read. It was uncomfortable for all the right reasons.....it made me think. 😆

tangoperutangoperuover 1 year ago

The wall is strong in this one.

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I write both professionally and for fun. The stories and essays I post on this site are for fun. I've also taken the first steps to self-publishing under the name Freddie T Camel, although more as an experiment than an ambition. I want to write stories that have emotional res...