All Comments on 'The Relative Advantages of Sight'

by Alex Finch

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hungbungyounghungbungyoungabout 19 years ago
wow

Great story. Very hot. One criticism -- probably best split into two parts, with more build up and length in part two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great, but proof-reading needed

You've got some 'his' and 'hers' mixed up. Great story, very punchy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
All relative

Different. Weird. Slow.

Lukas

DazzyDDazzyDover 3 years ago
Put me

Coach, I'm ready. HOT

Anonymous
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